29 May 2013

Write Tribe Prompt # 4

 
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Ths lovely picture of a girl holding red rose petals and her red sweater reminded me of a poem that my daughter wrote when she was in Class V, which was perhaps in 1996 or 1997.  It is a sweet little poem.  Just for the record, it has not been published before.

Here goes in her own lovely handwriting:








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20 comments:

  1. RajaWednesday 29 May 2013 at 21:16:00 GMT+5:30

    Very sweet, Ava. And very imaginative of your daughter. :-) Thanks for sharing.

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  2. harveyWednesday 29 May 2013 at 21:22:00 GMT+5:30

    Am completely bowled over!
    Don't tell me she has stopped writing now!
    In class V, that means she was 10 or so!
    Wow! She does have talent!
    Tell her she must continue!

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  3. AvaWednesday 29 May 2013 at 21:51:00 GMT+5:30

    Thank you Raja, for reading and commenting.

    Harv: As far as I know, she has not written anything since. :(

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  4. Shilpa GargWednesday 29 May 2013 at 21:54:00 GMT+5:30

    Wow! That is so sweet!! A very creative and an imaginative poem for a class V student!!
    Does she writes poems even now!?

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  5. AvaWednesday 29 May 2013 at 21:54:00 GMT+5:30

    Thanks Shilpa, No.. alas!

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  6. BhargaviWednesday 29 May 2013 at 22:44:00 GMT+5:30

    Aww..that is so sweet.. She wrote that when she was in class V!! You should ask her to write..

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  7. KISLAYA GOPALWednesday 29 May 2013 at 23:50:00 GMT+5:30

    Wow thats a very superb poem coming from a five year old girl, loved it, its awesome, yes all this is red...I also liked the handwritten version, some nostalgia and pure innocence.

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  8. AvaThursday 30 May 2013 at 08:21:00 GMT+5:30

    Thank you Bhargavi. I wish she would still write. But she is busy.

    Kislaya: I wanted to post it in her handwriting. This is also a way of preserving it. :)

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  9. Bhavya NThursday 30 May 2013 at 16:04:00 GMT+5:30

    Wow, if in standard V she could write like that... please please ask her to continue :)

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  10. JANUThursday 30 May 2013 at 20:02:00 GMT+5:30

    This is so beautiful...at the age of 10? Commendable. Her writing is good too.

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  11. Kajal KapurFriday 31 May 2013 at 00:57:00 GMT+5:30

    That's a creative one! Very nice indeed :)

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  12. GiribalaFriday 31 May 2013 at 02:15:00 GMT+5:30

    Lovely indeed!! :-)

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  13. UnknownFriday 31 May 2013 at 14:46:00 GMT+5:30

    Hats off to your talented daughter. Does She still write?

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  14. Corinne RodriguesFriday 31 May 2013 at 18:01:00 GMT+5:30

    Such a sweet poem, Ava! Thank you for sharing it - does she know you did? :)

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  15. AvaFriday 31 May 2013 at 20:24:00 GMT+5:30

    Thank you girls.

    I am afraid she does not write right now. Later maybe.

    Corinne: I am sure she does ;)

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  16. SuzySunday 2 June 2013 at 12:43:00 GMT+5:30

    Very sweet. Thanks for sharing with us. And nice take on the prompt.
    Dropping by from Write Tribe

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  17. AvaSunday 2 June 2013 at 20:54:00 GMT+5:30

    Thank you, Suzy.

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  18. AnonymousMonday 3 June 2013 at 17:42:00 GMT+5:30

    That is such a sweet poem. Thanks for sharing. :)

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  19. AnonymousTuesday 4 June 2013 at 06:35:00 GMT+5:30

    Congrats... for the novel idea....Our children's writings and cards are our valuable treasures...thanks for sharing....Good luck

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  20. SmithaTuesday 4 June 2013 at 23:26:00 GMT+5:30

    Wow! Your daughter is really talented! A poem at that age!

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