Walking into an emergency ward of a
hospital is surely the most harrowing time of one’s life. I could
see the anxiety plainly on the faces of other people who were rushing
in along with me. Some were rushing out, slip in hand, going off to
the chemist to fill a prescription.
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I kept my head down and willed myself
not to cry. It was difficult. Just this morning I had left my wife
at home, eight months pregnant, her belly swollen beautifully. Her
hair in a disarray, face glowing with happiness. Everything was
fine, doctors assured us. The baby was growing just fine, all we had
to do was to wait for a month to hold our darling in our arms.
Shortly after lunch, I got a call from
Suman, my sister-in-law, her voice was high-pitched. “Didi has
fallen down the stairs. Sudha-didi and I are taking her to ___
hospital.”. She did not need to say “Come immediately”. I
spoke to my boss and was out of the office in 2 minutes. I drove
anxiously towards the hospital. Within an hour I was in the parking
lot. I called up Suman and barked:
“Where?”
“Emergency, Bed 32”, she was
equally brief.
I looked frantically around at people
in various states of illness strewn around the emergency ward,
searching for Bed 32. Suddenly I spotted Suman waving at me from
left corner.
She was smiling.
”The baby is fine.” She said. “Didi has a hairline fracture in her left shin. She has to wear a cast for a month”
”The baby is fine.” She said. “Didi has a hairline fracture in her left shin. She has to wear a cast for a month”
I looked at Sona, and brushed the
wayward hair off her forehead. Her eyes were damp, and her face
still bore traces of terror. But she was smiling.
Happy ending! Nice little story :-)
ReplyDeleteHappy ending! Nice little story :-)
ReplyDeleteDo baar bola to aur mazaa aaya. :) Thanks
ReplyDeleteLovely! The happy ending fills the heart with warmth. :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Raja. Did not have the heart to write anything awful for the first time.
ReplyDeleteThank god.
ReplyDeleteAlls well if ends well.
Was a scary start up but a pleasant ending.
Thank you Rohit.
ReplyDeleteSuch a sweet story, Ava! Thanks for joining in the prompt.
ReplyDeleteThanks Corinne,
ReplyDeletethanks for giving me an opportunity.
Short and sweet.
ReplyDeleteWell done
Sweet! Thank goodness for happy endings. :-)
ReplyDeleteRight you are Madhu :)
ReplyDeleteHarvoo
ReplyDeleteI missed your comment. :)
Thanks.
Thanks God it ended at a positive note. I am always scared when it comes to children/babies...am sensitive about them!
ReplyDeleteReally, Rainbow :)
ReplyDeleteKeep smiling
Short and nail biting.
ReplyDeleteTalk of fast stories!!
I read it so fast to know if all was well!!
It ended sweetly :-)
Good story! I am glad it ended well.
ReplyDeleteI was reading this bated breath! Thank God, all was well!! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Pacifist, Lalitha, Shilpa.
ReplyDeleteYour kind words mean a lot to me.
oh good! another Happy Ending story!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written :)
Thanks Pixie :)
ReplyDeleteIts amazing how a mother-to-be brushes aside a cast for a MONTH to first say that the baby is fine. 10 months earlier, she wouldn't have smiled after a fall, would she have? :)
ReplyDeleteMeera
ps: Please remove the word prompt. Sometimes late in the night, its really painful to comment!
After such a scare.. a cast seems like a small thing :)
ReplyDeleteSorry about the word prompt. I kept gettng a lot of spam. Got tired of deleting it.
In a tense situation, the happy ending also takes time to digest! Thanks for sharing, Ava! :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you Vidya :)
ReplyDeletethe anxiety and the perfect climax was the icing on the reading. Perfect writing style :)
ReplyDeleteOf course the interpretation of emergency quite innovative :D :D
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A scary situation. I'm glad it had a happy ending :)
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